SUFFERING OLYMPICS
There is a kind of heroism in suffering,
Medals are offered in some unknown place,
Rewarding the longest list of ordeals.
There seems to be a voice saying:
‘I am a big deal because I have endured so
much.’
So nobody suffers in silence unless of
course the suffering is a shameful one.
Malik, was slow to seek a hearing
She, barely a teenager, a labourer at a
city estate
Waited for when her aunt Boss,
Whose treatment towards her was gross,
Had gone to work in her sleek Mercedes.
She just needed someone to listen to her
for a minute.
The maid next door all self-absorbed on
the borrowed mirror,
Was quick at her dismissal telling her:
‘Malik, we are all in this city to make a
living,
My cousin died, my mama got cancer, my
aunt Boss hates my manners,
And her husband keeps winking at me. Have
I died?’
And the suffering Olympics unfolded.
The man manning the gate absorbed at
Malik’s looks
Was quick at his dismissal telling her:
‘Malik, we are in this city making a
living,
I owe so many people money and promises,
my wife at home just gave birth. Have I died?
You are so dumb not to give into your
Uncle Boss, I see the way he looks at you.’
And
the suffering Olympics unfolded.
On the phone home, her friend answered
half interested
She was quick at her dismissal telling
her:
‘Malik, you are in the city living in a
mansion, wearing the latest fashions,
Your Aunt and Uncle Boss like you. I am
here walking from the river,
A pot on the head, a child on my back.
Have I died?’
And the suffering Olympics unfolded.
Clearly, Malik came first on the list of
suffering Olympics,
Her funeral was packed with all sorts of
mourners,
Each asking Malik, the Ghost, why she
didn’t share her problems
Instead of just taking her life away.
Deep within the mourners was a great loss,
Not of losing a friend in Malik
But of losing the medal of the suffering
Olympics to Malik.
©
October 2020
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ReplyDeleteMany die for failing to share their problems, or for failing to get a shoulder to cry on. What a pity!
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